Progression 1

                                                                  Summary One

            In the article “The Women’s Crusade,” Nickolas D. Kristof and Sheryl Wudunn explain the discrimination women from different countries around the world encounter. Kristof and Wudunn focus on the experiences of two females from different countries, Saima and Abbas, who experience harsh discrimination as a result of living in an area where women have no authority or limited rights. Kristof and Wudunn reiterate the importance of aiding these developing areas, focusing on educating women. Furthermore, Kristof and Wudunn include details in the reading that informs the reader of the severity of the discrimination women encounter where, these women experience rape, beatings, and many other different types of brutalities.
                                                                   Summary Two
            In the video “Human Trafficking: Modern-day Slavery in America,” CNN interviews two former modern-day slaves, Nicole and Zena, who were brought to the United States from Africa along with twenty other females almost ten years ago. According to CNN the females were promised an education but they were instead enslaved in Newark, New Jersey. The females were forced to work in hair braiding salons giving up their freedom, serving clients all day for five to six years with minimal food, and with the captors taking all the money that the slaves earned.  CNN explains that money was the main cause for enslaving the girls, which made the captors about 4 million dollars.
                                                                   Summary Three
            In the article “Somalia Communities Say ‘NO’ To Female Genital Cutting,” Denise Shepherd-Johnson describes the gathering of hundreds of men, women and children to a historical declaration on the collective abandonment of female genital mutilation by representatives from 20 communities in Somalia.  According to Johnson Somalia has one of the highest rates of female genital mutilation in the world, with more than 98 percent of women between the ages of 15-49 having experienced the process. Johnson explains that by promoting the development of critical thinking and decision-making skills, UNICEF empowers communities to prioritize public issues and resolve problems together.   

Shepherd-Johnson, Denise. "Somali Communities Say ‘No’ To Female Genital Cutting."UNICEF. UNICEF, 14 Dec. 2009. Web. 17 Feb. 2014.
                                                       Female’s Get Mutilated (1st Draft)
            Probably more than half of the world is unaware of the horrifying practices women from Somalia, a country located in the Eastern part of Africa, encounter. Somalia has a population of ten million people, with the vast majority of the people being of Muslim faith. Many communities live in high poverty areas where there is a lack of education and health resources. Without proper resources to attain common knowledge communities in Somalia perform horrifying practices on their women in order to satisfy cultural expectations called Female Genital Mutilation or Circumcision, a cultural traditional procedure where female genital organs are partially or completely removed without medical reasons, essentially to protect a woman’s virginity and honor. Female genital mutilation may cause severe health issues such as immense pain, prolonged bleeding, infection, and even death. The practice has triggered a global protest against female circumcision because of the dangerous health consequences on the physical well being of women.
            The Somali people have practiced female genital mutilation since a long period of time, and while female circumcision is performed in 28 African countries as well, with an estimated 100-140 million girls and women have undergone the process, the practice is by far more common in Somalia. The Somalis classify the practice into two forms: Sunna form, which consists of anything less than infibulations, such as the partial or total removal of the clitoris and labia minora, and the most extreme form, Pharoanic, or infibulations, which involves a partial or total removal of the external genitalia and a sealing of the vaginal opening, leaving only a small hole for urine and menstrual blood to pass (Gele). The process is often performed on Somali girls between the ages of 4-10 by a medical practitioner, midwife, or most often by a traditional practitioner from a family in which generations of that specific family have been traditional practitioners, circumcisers receive compensation in the form of food, livestock, money, or all these items. The procedure often takes place in a rural setting without anesthesia, or in a medical place. In a rural environment unsanitary tools such as a razor blade, knife, or sharp are often used for the practice. Unlike the rest of the world where the less severe forms of female circumcision such as the Sunna form are predominant and consists of 85 percent of all female genital mutilation, the vast majority of Somali girls are infibulated, which is approximately 80-90 percent (Gele).
            All regions in Somalia practice female circumcision, but the type of form of the practice varies in different locations of the country. Infibulations is more common among pastoralist-dominated communities in the northern and central parts of the country than in the farming communities of the south. According to the article “Have We Made Progress In Somalia After 30 Years of Interventions? Attitudes Toward Female Circumcision Among People In The Hargeisa District,” Abdi A Gele states that infibulations were nearly nonexistent among southern communities in the early 19th century, while it was over 95 percent in the northern pastoralist communities.
            There are many short-term and long-term health consequences associated with female genital mutilation, with the health risk varying based on the seriousness of the procedure performed. The sanitary condition of the tools used, the level of experience the circumciser has, severity of cutting, and the health of the girl or women often can indicate the health risks. If death occurs, it is often due to severe bleeding, pain, infection, oozing pus, gangrene, tetanus, chronic ulcers, or all of these conditions (Kjala). Dramatic swelling near wounds has led to urine retention that often last for hours or even days. Women often experience immense pain during sexual intercourse, which makes sex undesirable to many women who’ve been circumcised.
            In addition, a study was conducted, out of 108 men, 104 or 96 percent preferred to marry circumcised women over uncircumcised ones. However, 92 or 85 percent preferred the Sunna form, 12 or 11 percent preferred the pharoanic form and only 2.8 percent would choose uncircumcised women to be their wives (Gala), the statistics indicate that men are more likely to support the continuation of female circumcision than females and the majority prefer a circumcised woman as a wife. The continued support for female circumcision in Somalia has more to do with a religious misconception that has to do with a stronger belief that the Sunna form is a religious obligation than any other reason.
            Despite the inhumane practice and the health consequences, female genital mutilation is difficult to address. Circumcised girls and women are hesitant to speak about their experiences because of the fear of being, labeled, and attacked as a savage, uncivilized society (khaja). Often when circumcised women themselves have spoken out to remove the practice completely, their own communities have characterized them as betrayers or sellouts, they are also viewed as women who have dishonored sacred cultural traditions. Women who choose to speak out against this cultural practice face high levels of disapproval from their community. They are often criticized because they are from a non-dominant culture, furthermore, they have experienced a cultural practice that has been recognized by the Western society as harmful.
            Without men’s involvement in major controversial issues, the efforts toward the abolishment of female circumcision may have minimal chance of success. Men’s involvement is critical in the efforts towards the abandonment of female genital mutilation, even though men are not the target of the information, education, and communication campaigns in Somalia, nor have they played a key role in campaigns against female circumcision (Gele). It is not a simple task for a Somali female campaigner to talk about the disadvantages of female circumcision to their male counterparts. According to Gele, “In order to target men, the institutions that run female circumcision programs should also include men, who can be used to influence other men’s attitude toward the practice,” Gele is insisting that it is essential for males to take major roles toward the abolishment of female mutilation.
            In November of 2009 hundreds, of men, women and children gathered in a Somalia stadium to witness a historic declaration: the collective abandonment of female genital mutilation and cutting by representatives from 20 communities. In the reading “Somali Communities Say ‘No’ to Female Genital Cutting,” Denise Shepherd-Johnson states, “By promoting the development of critical thinking and decision-making skills, the UNICEF-supported Tostan program empowers communities to prioritize public issues and resolve problems together,” the essence of Johnson’s argument is that if organizations make unity, together they can promote essential skills and make the lives of Somali women more pleasurable.
            Female genital mutilation is a horrifying practice that affects the lives of many women. Organizations must work together in order to strive to understand diverse cultural practices and work with those who are deprived from the development of policies and practices in order to insure the health and well being of all women. If the proposed solutions to address this controversial issue were to take place, Women’s Rights would claim a historic victory.                           
                 

Work Cited
Gele, Abdi A., Bente P. Bø, and Johanne Sundby. "Have We Made Progress In Somalia After 30 Years Of Interventions? Attitudes Toward Female Circumcision Among People In The Hargeisa District." BMC Research Notes 6.1 (2013): 1-9.Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Feb. 2014.
KHAJA, KHADIJA, KATHY LAY, and STEPHANIE BOYS. "Female Circumcision: Toward An Inclusive Practice Of Care."Health Care For Women International 31.8 (2010): 686-699. Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Feb. 2014.
Shepherd-Johnson, Denise. "Somali Communities Say ‘No’ To Female Genital Cutting."UNICEF. N.p., 14 Dec. 2009. Web. 12 Feb. 2014.
                                                Female’s Get Mutilated(2nd Daft)
            Probably more than half of the world is unaware of the horrifying practices women from Somalia, a country located in the Eastern part of Africa, encounter. Somalia has a population of ten million people, with the vast majority of the people being of Muslim faith. Many communities live in high poverty areas where there is a lack of education and health resources. Without proper resources to attain common knowledge communities in Somalia perform Female Genital Mutilation (or circumcision) on their women in order to satisfy cultural expectations. Female Genital Mutilation or Circumcision, a cultural traditional procedure in which a female’s genitalia is either partially or completely removed without medical reason, essentially to protect a woman’s virginity and honor. Female genital mutilation may cause severe health issues such as immense pain, prolonged bleeding, infection, and even death. The practice has triggered a global protest against female circumcision because of the dangerous health consequences on the physical and emotional well being of women.
            The Somali people have practiced female genital mutilation for many years, and while female circumcision is performed in 28 African countries as well, with an estimated 100-140 million girls and women have undergone the process, the practice is by far more common in Somalia. The Somalis classify the practice into two forms: Sunna form, which consists of anything less than infibulations, or cutting and stitching of the vagina, such as the partial or total removal of the clitoris and labia minora, and the most extreme form, Pharoanic, or infibulations, which involves a partial or total removal of the external genitalia and a sealing of the vaginal opening, leaving only a small hole for urine and menstrual blood to pass (Gele). The process is often performed on Somali girls between the ages of 4-10 by a medical practitioner, midwife, or most often by a traditional practitioner from a family in which generations of that specific family have been traditional practitioners. Circumcisers receive compensation in the form of food, livestock, money, or all these items, which also serves as an incentive for the continuation of the practice (Khaja). The procedure often takes place in a rural setting without anesthesia using unsanitary tools such as a razor blade, knife, or sharp are often used for the practice. Unlike the rest of the world where the less severe forms of female circumcision such as the Sunna form are predominant and consists of 85 percent of all female genital mutilation, the vast majority of Somali girls, 80-90 percent, are infibulated, the most extreme method of circumcision (Gele).
            All regions in Somalia practice female circumcision, but the type of form of the practice varies in different locations of the country. Infibulations is more common among pastoralist-dominated communities in the northern and central parts of the country than in the farming communities of the south. According to the article “Have We Made Progress In Somalia After 30 Years of Interventions? Attitudes Toward Female Circumcision Among People In The Hargeisa District,” Abdi A Gele states that infibulations were nearly nonexistent among southern communities in the early 19th century, while it was over 95 percent in the northern pastoralist communities.
            There are many short-term and long-term health consequences associated with female genital mutilation, with the health risk varying based on the seriousness of the procedure performed, the sanitary condition of the tools used, the level of experience of the circumciser, the severity of cutting, and the health of the girl or women often can reveal the health risks. If death occurs, it is often due to severe bleeding, pain, infection, oozing pus, gangrene, tetanus, chronic ulcers, or all of these conditions (Kjala). Dramatic swelling near wounds has led to urine retention that often last for hours or even days. Women often experience immense pain during sexual intercourse, which makes sex undesirable to many women who’ve been circumcised, and high-risk pregnancies.
            However, this procedure is formed largely due to the continued acceptance of traditional practices, which is what is expected from most communities on Somalia. A study mentioned in “Have We Made Progress In Somalia After 30 Years Of Interventions? Attitudes Toward Female Circumcision Among People In The Hargeisa District” revealed that 96 percent of men surveyed stated that they preferred to marry a circumcised woman over uncircumcised ones. In addition, 85 percent preferred the Sunna form (the less invasive), while 11 percent preferred the pharoanic (Gala). Only 2.8 percent would marry an uncircumcised woman. The statistics indicate that men are more likely to support the continuation of female circumcision than females and the majority prefers a circumcised woman as a wife. Families are cautious that in order for their daughters to reach marriage they must comply with traditional rituals and force them into these horrifying practices, since males are more likely to prefer a circumcised female to ensure virginity and fidelity. The continued support for female circumcision in Somalia has more to do with a religious misconception, idea that circumcision is a necessity, which has to do with a stronger belief that the Sunna form is a religious obligation than any other reason.
            Despite the inhumane practice and the health consequences, female genital mutilation is difficult to address. Circumcised girls and women are hesitant to speak about their experiences because of the fear of being, labeled, and attacked as a savage, uncivilized society (Khaja). Often when circumcised women have spoken out in their own communities to stop the practice, their own communities have characterized them as betrayers of traditional morals. Furthermore, they are also viewed as women who have dishonored sacred cultural traditions. Women who choose to speak out against this cultural practice face high levels of disapproval from their community. They are often criticized because they are from a non-dominant culture where their voice has no meaning, in addition, they have experienced a cultural practice that has been recognized by the Western society as harmful, resulting in dishonor from the family or community for opposing the practice.
            Without men’s involvement in major controversial issues, the efforts toward the abolishment of female circumcision may have minimal chance of success. Men’s involvement is critical in the efforts towards the abandonment of female genital mutilation since it is a male dominant culture. However, men are rarely the target of the information, education, and communication campaigns against female circumcision in Somalia, which is problematic (Gele). It is not a simple task for a Somali female campaigner to talk about the disadvantages of female circumcision to their male counterparts. According to Abdi A. Gele, “In order to target men, the institutions that run female circumcision programs should also include men, who can be used to influence other men’s attitude toward the practice” it is essential for males to take major roles toward the abolishment of female mutilation.
            In November of 2009 hundreds, of men, women and children gathered in a Somalia stadium to witness a historic declaration: the collective abandonment of female genital mutilation and cutting by representatives from 20 communities. In the reading “Somali Communities Say ‘No’ to Female Genital Cutting,” Denise Shepherd-Johnson states, “By promoting the development of critical thinking and decision-making skills, the UNICEF-supported Tostan program empowers communities to prioritize public issues and resolve problems together,” the essence of Johnson’s argument is that if organizations make unity, together they can promote essential skills and make the lives of Somali women more pleasurable. Although international regulations have passed to ban all forms of female circumcision, since it is described as violence against females due to the severe affects it has on health, it still persists as part of daily life in half of the countries in Africa. (Khaja).
            Female genital mutilation is a horrifying practice that affects the lives of many women in Somalia. Increasing awareness over this controversial issue can be key in officially abolishing female circumcision. Organizations must work together, along with the public, in order to strive to understand diverse cultural practices and work with those who are deprived from the development of policies and practices in order to insure the health and well being of all women. If the proposed solutions to address this controversial issue were to take place, Women’s Rights would claim a historic victory.                           
Work Cited
Gele, Abdi A., Bente P. Bø, and Johanne Sundby. "Have We Made Progress In Somalia After 30 Years Of Interventions? Attitudes Toward Female Circumcision Among People In The Hargeisa District." BMC Research Notes 6.1 (2013): 1-9.Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Feb. 2014.
Khaja, Khadija, Kathy Lay, and Stephanie Boys. "Female Circumcision: Toward An Inclusive Practice Of Care."Health Care For Women International 31.8 (2010): 686-699. Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Feb. 2014.
Shepherd-Johnson, Denise. "Somali Communities Say ‘No’ To Female Genital Cutting."UNICEF. UNICEF, 14 Dec. 2009. Web. 17 Feb. 2014.




     

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